Is this a good Fanficion about Hikaru Hitachiin(OHS)and Rima Touya(VK)?

Just making sure before I publish! enjoy!"Where am I?"Rima rubbed her head and walked around.Rima closed her eyes as she thoght she was dreaming.She began to walk around and suddenly walked into someone."Oww!"!Rima screeched."Oh sorry" a voice replied to her."Who are you?" Rima asked."Oh"I'm Hikaru Hitachiin and you are?."You don't go to ouran high school do you right?""And telling by your uniform." he chuckled shyly."No" Rima blushed."I go to cross academy.But I don't know how I ended up here.""Oh and I'm Rima Touya.Nice to meet you.""Nice you too" Hikaru replied."While you still have the time want to go see around my school?""Ahh, yes I will be delighted.""So these are the classrooms,and I work for a host club which is over there in the music room and I cant tell you about that now what I do in the host club but probably next time".Hikaru said in a shy voice.Rima noticed he was blushing.After he showed me around the school and the emotions he been showing me I had a feeling he was shy and he liked,not even like but even loved like love at first sight.I liked him too I mean love I think it was love at first sight.It was�time for me to go back to school."Sorry I have to got back to school!""Thanks and nice meeting you Hikaru!"I ran as fast as I can."Bye" ..Hikaru said in a sad voice."See you again soon....I hope .."he sighed.